Rayne’s Secret: Part 4

At this point I was beginning to feel ill. I sat there puzzled as my mom cried uncontrollably. I looked up to the ceiling as if God could give me answers and got nothing but dizziness instead. I was lightheaded and it had just occurred to me at that point that none of us had…

Rayne’s Secret: Part 3

“No, this can’t be happening! This isn’t real. Who else is here?” I had never seen my mom look so scared in her life. She had the same look that Rayne had whenever someone was after her to repay her gambling debt. I watched as she began trembling and then took a step back before…

Rayne’s Secret: Part Two

We each headed downstairs one by one and let Rayne go last for the big surprise. I was over it but I needed to know what secret she was holding on to. “Everyone I have a big surprise for you” my mom said with excitement. Just then Rayne walks down and the room is filled…

Rayne’s Secret: Part One

It’s funny how the holidays can bring family closer together. Even those that haven’t spoken throughout the year still manage to come out, put on a fake smile, and enjoy each other’s company. Sometimes you end up enjoying each other so much you forget what kept you away for so long. This may not be…

Eve’s Journey – Short Story

Please read my first short story and comment your thoughts below. I’m considering doing a second part to it but I want to get some feedback first. Thanks in advance! As I walked up to the gate. I was very excited about the trip ahead. I was flying out to Bermuda to cover the the…